If you didn’t know, I’ve been working on a essay about my project (about global warming) for about 6 weeks. It was a 5 paragraph essay that took a lot of time and thinking. Something difficultly challenging was finding the information I needed to write the essay. It was really hard to find, I had to surf the web in a short amount of time to find a very describing sentence. But, it all worked out.

I was really proud about how my essay turned out, but I was mostly proud of how many mistakes I made and had to fix. In the beginning, my paragraph had a lot of mistakes that I had to fix, so i fixed them over my 3 drafts. There were so many sentence that wasn’t clear about the information I was trying to say. So, I am proud of all the mistakes that I made because all the mistakes led up to the essay that I am proud of. Next time, I am hoping to improve on my research, I sorta struggled with it so I didn’t get the best information. Next time, I will take my time to find the best of the best information. I mean, I will be having to do this for the rest of my school years.